adds more to discussion

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--- a/calvin-meet-yakaterina.txt
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@@ -43,8 +43,8 @@ Calvin groaned internally.

 Annoyance flitted across her face.

-―Calvin, the Meadowlark isn't magic.
-	You've seen what the Flocks can do.
+―Calvin, the Meadowlark isn't some non-existent magic.
+	You've seen what the Hierarchy can do.

 ―Fine, but the hair isn't just ordinary hair, right?
 	Is it at least related to why the Flocks have been growing more violent?