diff --git a/bovril-tells-kral-about-leaving-ottawa.txt b/bovril-tells-kral-about-leaving-ottawa.txt
index a032f51..bbf7357 100644
--- a/bovril-tells-kral-about-leaving-ottawa.txt
+++ b/bovril-tells-kral-about-leaving-ottawa.txt
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Kral was, like most yaks, asleep when his father entered his room almost offensively early in the morning, travelling bag on his shoulder.
+Kral was, like nearly everyone else in the country, asleep when his father entered his room almost offensively early in the morning, travelling bag on his shoulder.
 
 ―Kralvin, come with me.
  	I want to show you something.